Here is a second backstory poem about my latest character, Scorpius. I've been writing about him all weekend, so I did up a poem that delves deeper into his psyche. Scorpius is Chamberlain of the Keep for Lady Elysande, in a fantasy world that combines medieval society with technology. You can read the previous backstory poem and catch up on excerpt 1 and excerpt 2. I've modelled Scorpius after English actor Richard Armitage.
I Can’t Be Your Captive If I Give Myself To You
My tunic covers scars upon both wrists
Their silent witness to the blows I bore
I pulled and writhed but he would not desist
Until I would have crumpled to the floor
The manacles prevented my escape
They also meant I somehow kept my feet
The manacles preserved my pride from japes
Which never pulled the screams as when he beat
My tunic covers scars that she’s now seen
My lady with her cuffs chained to her bed
Her fingers lock me into place, between
Two posts, my clothing gone – those words I said
I hand myself to her, to be her slave
Surrender is my only hope...or grave...
Copyright - Julia Smith – Aug. 17, 2008
Sunday, August 17, 2008
Poetry Train Monday - 62 - I Can’t Be Your Captive If I Give Myself To You
Posted by Julia Phillips Smith at 9:43 PM
Labels: I Can’t Be Your Captive If I Give Myself To You, Poem, Poetry Train, Richard Armitage, Scorpius