This is a brand new poem, a backstory poem for one of my fictional characters. Arlen is a 17-year-old boy who lives in a cabin in the woods with his mother and step-father. It's the 1830's, and Arlen works the traplines with his step-father.
The relationship between Arlen and the step-father is strained at best. They are rivals for his mother's affections, and the step-father is a hard man. This story is from a screenplay titled The Penitent and the dream opens the film.
That Dream Again
In dreams I turn
Snapped twig reveals
Two eyes watching
Forest shadow moves
Breath seizes throat
Neck beads sweat
No time to reach
Musket hangs useless
Cool autumn air
Lacework gold above
Crunching leaves below
Bear surges forth
Your shot rings out
Heart nearly fails
Bear drops, tongue
Lolls from snout
You stride up
Lower musket
In dreams I turn
Your gaze moves
Up from kill
No time to run
Musket recoils
I jerk awake
In dreams I turn
I start awake
I clutch chest
No wound gapes
But sweat beads
On bowed neck
Copyright - Julia Smith - 2008
Monday, March 31, 2008
Poetry Train Monday - 43 - That Dream Again
Posted by Julia Phillips Smith at 9:22 PM
Labels: Poem, Poetry Train, That Dream Again, The Penitent