This is another one from my university days. I've chosen one of my mom's paintings as a companion to the poem. Titled 'Ships at Sail', the painting and the poem were created within a few years of each other. I'll be showcasing 13 of her pieces on my Thursday Thirteen this week.
Vertical Narrative
When I was five
I looked to the heavens
Unsure of 'forever and ever
Amen'
If everyone wanted that
Ascention to paradise
Why should that lack of
Closure
Unnerve me
Why did everyone point
And ask if I could
See the face
The Man in the Moon
Why did they gather
Gazing upon canvasses of
Blobbed color
Splatters
Even holes torn
Twisted bronze
Sculpture or
Snicker
'Eraserhead'
Conundrum
How I remember that night
When two eyes
Cheeks
A smile emerged
From the lunar surface
Riddles of design
Recover from their sojourn
To the Tower of Babel
I am left reaching for
The face of Creation
Happy for now with
My stake in the
Garden of
The very
First
Morn
Poem copyright 1993 Julia Smith
Watercolor ink and sand, copyright 1995 Paulette Phillips
Monday, September 17, 2007
Poetry Train Monday - 19 - Vertical Narrative
Posted by Julia Phillips Smith at 6:50 PM
Labels: Mom, Paulette Phillips, Poem, Watercolor